Pear review
Afer reviewing my paper by my peer, I found that my paragraphs were too long , and I understood that I can change each of those long paragraph to some seperate paragraphs with different topic sentence.
Hi, The problem that you had is almost the same that I discovered. In my case, I was mixing two topics in long paragraphs. It is good to know that we got it before handing in.
After reading your blog I need to double check the lengths of my paragraphs and make sure to see if I too have to break them apart.
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Hi,
ReplyDeleteThe problem that you had is almost the same that I discovered. In my case, I was mixing two topics in long paragraphs. It is good to know that we got it before handing in.